Grammar refers to the rules regarding the current
standard of correctness in speech and writing. Advances in word processing software have
included grammar-checking features. This page covers two topics:
Misplaced/dangling modifiers
- A modifier is a word or group of words that describes another word and makes its meaning
more specific. Often modifying phrases add information about "where",
"when", or "how" something is done. A modifier works best when it is
right next to the word it modifies. For example, consider the modifiers in the following
sentence (they are underlined for you):
"The awesome dude rode a wave breaking on the shore."
- The word "awesome" is an adjective (or, a one-word modifier). It sits right
next to the "dude" it modifies. Also, the phrase "breaking on the
shore" tells us where he rode the wave; thus, "breaking on the shore" is a
modifying phrase that must be placed next to the "wave" it modifies.
- Below are some examples of poorly placed modifiers. See if you can identify the
problems:
Roger looked at twenty-five sofas shopping on Saturday.
- Obviously twenty-five sofas were not shopping on Saturday. Because Shopping on Saturday
is meant to modify Roger, it should be right next to Roger, as follows:
Shopping on Saturday, Roger looked at twenty-five sofas.
The woman tore open the package she had just received with her
fingernails.
- Had the woman really received the package with her fingernails? The writer meant that
she tore open the package with her fingernails.
With her fingernails, the woman tore open the package she had just
received.
The waiter brought the pancakes to the table drenched in blueberry
syrup.
What's drenched according to the sentence? Actually, the pancakes were
drenched.
The waiter brought the pancakes, drenched in blueberry syrup, to the
table.
Lying in a heap on the closet floor, Jean found her son's dirty
laundry.
It sounds as if Jean was lying on the closet floor when she found her
son's laundry!
Jean found her son's dirty laundry lying in a heap on the closet floor.
Using Commas
This exercise will help to determine how well you know where and when to use commas.
Insert commas where needed in the following sentences. Then read the explanations below.
- The restaurant dessert tray featured carrot cake coconut cream pie and something called
death-by-chocolate.
- Because I was three hours short of graduation requirements I had to take a course during
the summer.
- The weather according to last night's forecast will improve by Saturday.
- Students hurried to the campus store to buy their fall textbooks but several of the
books were already out of stock.
- My sister asked "Are you going to be on the phone much longer?"
The restaurant dessert tray featured carrot cake, coconut cream pie, and
something called death-by-chocolate.
The comma separates the items in a series.
Because I was three hours short of graduation requirements, I had to
take a course during the summer.
The comma separates an introductory phrase or dependent clause from the rest of the
sentence.
The weather, according to last night's forecast, will improve by
Saturday.
The phrase "according to last night's forecast" interrupts the main
clause, so it is set off by commas.
- Students hurried to the campus store to buy their fall textbooks, but several of the
books were already out of stock.
The comma separates an independent clause from a dependent clause.
- My sister asked, "Are you going to be on the phone much longer?"
The comma separates a direct quotation from the rest of the sentence.
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